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Actually, my first thought on the "How Not to Cut Adjectives" is that the sentence provided has a deep-rooted problem: namely, it's pretty vacuous. It might make better sense in context, but then, context would also make it clear what the challenge she was facing was, so it would be redundant.

Of course, that might be that most sentences sound dumb in isolation, which is a grave problem when trying to demonstrate how to build one.

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